Bloody Good Friends

Bloody Good Friends although short was a good read. Some of the English did feel really awkward, but I personally think that the story itself was well told and engaging as I kept revising what I thought the final twist was all the way up until the end. The soundtrack itself was nice and although the sprites were basic they were still nice especially for a first time novel. One glaring issue I had with this short story was that far too many sentences were told in an especially awkward and grating first person where the MC would start everything with, "I did this." I did that." "I thought this." Maybe the sentences all starting like that is just a by product of this being Polish to English, but describing the world with more than, "I did this I did that" would really improve any later stories the dev creates. Overall for a first time VN I think this was a good read and I hope the dev continues to make more stories and improves from their starting point of Bloody Good Friends.