In The Line Of My Heart

This game is so short I had to idle a bit to even post a review of this. I enjoy the background art, and that's honestly what got me interested to buy it. There's a few references here and there that are nice nods to much better games, it has a sort of western VN feel. But unfortunately that's all I can really say. The game is WAY too short, and there are better games for $2, or even free. The translation is the worst part, since it still uses parts and pieces of Spanish here and there and it ends up sounding really awkward. The text also crawls off the edge of the textbox, and the history function (which is the only function in the game) won't show the most recent past messages unless they're like 3-4 messages old. If I can offer any advice to the developers, is that please make the game longer (two pages of text isn't a story, sorry) before you charge money for it and learn how to use the engine better. Good hentai games have galleries. Maybe learn to use Renpy.

Definitely needs a proper proof reading before this game is worth any amount of money. If given the proper corrections I would change this rating but as the game stands right now it is an incomplete x draft.