The Language of Love

A short story with mediocre and repetitive writing. It would be much better if mentioned more of the challenges Mitsuki and Kyouko face and how they deal with their relationships with others (Ayako, Tama with Keiichi, Kyouko’s family, and even Kirara), could also have some more writing on Miho or even the raffle girl. I understand that they’ve been together for quite a while (~a year?), but I didn’t feel like the writing was sufficient to make me believe their bonds are strong enough to stay for long, instead of yet another love tragedy yet to be revealed to us readers.

This was a pretty good read! While not my favorite I still had a fun time reading this one

It was good, I enjoyed my time with it. There were some parts where I didn't mesh 100% with the story. I am chalking it up to my own personal preference on what I think someone would do/say. But I'm not an author and I'm not going to be overly negative because it's not the way I would write (if I did). It's nice to see a story that's not two perfect pure teenagers falling in love for the first time and etc etc.

Quick and straight forward. No choices just a story of love between 2 adults, and the mother's daughter.

Overall it was pleasantly wholesome with some sweet (and steamy) moments, but it's not one of ebi-hime's stronger works. An absurd amount of dialogue consists of "that's right", and the protagonist's affection for his love interest's insufferable daughter wasn't convincing (thanks for reminding me why I don't like children, I guess). And right after the climax (in more ways than one) it abruptly ends, and it's just... that's it, guess we're done now. Writing aside: some of the song choices rubbed me the wrong way, and hearing a loud BLUNK! every time I wanted to save or go back rudely snapped me out of the story. And if a new CG comes up, you will not be able to back up to the text that was onscreen before. Speaking of CGs, they were unobjectionable for the most part, but there were some inconsistencies - for one, the final scene is set in January when it's cold and the sky is "steely grey", yet the accompanying image shows a beautiful blue sky, green leaves on a tree in the background, and what appear to be cherry blossom petals (?????) floating on the breeze. Also, [spoiler]breasts do not point straight up like that when the person they belong to is lying down[/spoiler]. Last…

Me ha sorprendido para bien. Es una Novela Visual con una historia simple, pero bien contado, con unos personajes adorables y bien construidos. Aunque pueda parecer la típica historia de amor (y en buena parte lo es), el hecho de que la mujer sea madre soltera lo cambia todo. Una niña que no es la típica niña perfecta, sino que causa los problemas típicos de una niña. La madre que está siempre pensando que la gente le está juzgando y con miedo de no ser una buena madre. Y el protagonista, tímido e inseguro pero de muy buen corazón. Es una Novela Visual sin elecciones, es como leer un libro. Afortunadamente no hay mucho Fan Service. Muy recomendable si quieres leer una historia de amor bien construida.