Final Boss

Game is far too short, it is more like a single, extended scene. The grammar is poor but understandable. Suggest developer works a bit more on personal pronouns. The text is sometimes used to bridge activities that other VN actually show and that decreases the value of the "game" too.

Guy meets girl at party. They hit it off. Hijinks ensue.

Normally i am very forgiving im my reviews, because i know what hard work it is to make a game or a VN. But this is just bad. The english grammar is bad, for example there are changes between "he", "she", "it" and even "we" for the personal pronoun of the protagonists. The story is way too short to be interesting (My playtime was 16 Minutes). And the pictures don´t always match the story. It´s okay for a first try, but i wouldn´t dare to charge money for this and much more work is needed to make a good VN.

Not quite fulfilling as it appears to be. I do realize "less is more" but too much of anything is a BAD THING. Which is too say, too little of anything sexual and too much of textual content (too many reading). Too short too. Not even boner inducing. At least with Emi - New Beginning, a similar short Adult VN game, has BETTER VISUALS, BETTER designs in the female character department and sex scenes. 4 out of 10

Total Crap

I ♥♥♥ af.