PERSEVERANCE: Chapter 1

For $1.50 how can you go wrong? LOL.. it's not a bad "deal" but, I really hated this game. I'm a big fan of NTR. This is NTR done wrong. Basically you GF is a huge slut, that's the plot. There is no animation, all stills and text. Pass unless your budget is minimal and this is all you can afford.

It's... appropriately priced. It's clear that the developers spent a lot of time generating images that fit their hot-girl-with-gross-guy fetish (not judging; I like it too), but then utterly failed to do any kind of quality assurance on the programming and strung them together with an entirely incoherent story. Characters don't behave like real humans, even though the writing gets close to making you think they will sometimes. Your choices don't matter, even a little bit. You will see every scene no matter what you decide. The only difference is a couple of lines of reluctance dialog. The renders of the female protagonist waver in between being really hot and also kinda looking oddly old. Probably just a matter of applying different skin textures. Regarding the bad programming. In Ren'Py (their game engine), if the engine doesn't know where to go, it takes a guess. In this game, that guess means rewinding time almost to the beginning of the scene and making you click through the entire thing again before it progresses. It happens three or four times, it's really dumb, and each occurrence would be fixed by a single line of code. So yeah, it's a kinetic novel with a certain feti…

This novel contains script errors and render clip issues. Some clothing dont cover all the characters and Tracys forehead is also cut in some pictures. I do not agree either by the homeless blowjob. It could have been left out. Too much sex in novel is not good. Its minor detail but personally I dont like the fact that when you choose character that then rest characters in the novel are treated same manner. I think Jeff and other male thoughts have probably had been left out. It would be really nice naughty novel if the issues were fixed. But cannot recommend it with the script errors and pictures with the clip issues. Hope to see it fixed and the novel getting more content.

Well. I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that the developer has abandoned this avn. Which is a good thing because It's a worthless cluster ♥♥♥♥ of clueless writing and repeated scenes with male characters that look old enough to remember when dinosaurs roamed the earth and the scenes in the game are run over, and over, and over again. Hey. I get it. We all have a fetish of some type but this game is nothing but a have sex with old men fetish. I'm fairly sure that the city Tracy is in has a welcome sign that reads "Welcome to Viagra Elderly." The artwork and characters, including the MC are poorly done, and that is an understatement. Whoever wrote this pile of vile, and developed this pile of vile, didn't do it because he or she cared about the storyline, the characters, or the enjoyment of sharing a story that he or she created and brought to life. Nope. This is a take the money and run thing. Games like this should be removed from Steam and placed on and inactive list and removed from all search features when they receive no updates from the developer about the state of the game after a 3 month period. But they won't because Steam won't be able to make money off of it a…

[h1] Score: Art 10/10 | Writing 0/10 (Buy only on deep sale) [/h1] [h1] 评分：画风 10/10 | 文本 0/10（建议仅在骨折价入手） [/h1] [hr][/hr] [h1] Tracy, I'm sorry, you deserve a better writer. [/h1] [h1] 对不起 Tracy，你值得一个更好的作者。 [/h1] [b]Tracy is perfect. Her makeup, physique, and outfits are as tasteful as mine (pardon my vanity); but as stunning as she is, the developer's writing is equally insulting. I have no choice but to give this a thumbs down. [/b] [b]Tracy 是完美的，她的妆容、身材、穿搭都像我一样有品位（容我臭美一下）；然而她有多美，作者的文本就有多敷衍。这让我不得不差评。[/b] [b]"PowerPoint" Passions / PPT 式的激情：[/b] Every encounter follows the exact same template: two static images + repetitive dialogue. Did the developer run out of time writing their [b]academic paper[/b] and just throw in some rough drafts? 每一个对象都是“两张图 + 复读机台词”的固定流程。请问作者是把那些被导师毙掉的大论文，直接塞进来了吗？ [b]Desperate Machine-Translation Vibes / 令人绝望的机翻感：[/b] [quote] [b]Narrator:[/b] "Tracy was lost, submissive, and in control... Their passion transcended the physical, forming a bond." [b]Tracy:[/b] "Ah! Deeper! More! Continue!" [b]Male:[/b] "It’s incredible to have you. This day will be unforgettable." [/quote] Reading these repetitive lines feels like someone shoved a 10-year-old broken tr…

cant wait for the next chapter. please continue!