Trap for the Heir

Every time I start visual novels created by my native devs I feel esp excited willing to support them & see more of our stories but I always dread the English quality because usually it's a total disaster. Sadly, this one wasn't an exception:( It's the worst English 'translation' I've ever encountered and I've read some machine translated novels before but this one (－^ლ) At first I was seriously astonished that it's so bad 'cause in credits there's a name of the translator O_o so it shouldn't feel like machine translation, right, RIGHT?! But as someone commented English is practically nonexistent here:( Soon I've accepted that it's again a weird mixture of pronouns (it's always the case for our language due to the grammar gender), mixture of first & third type narration, literal translation of our idioms. At the beginning I was even constantly laughing, though annoyed that I'm always distracted and get not the kind of experience I was hoping for when I started this novel. Something like 'The sun was baking' as our way of saying it was scorching hot made me roar with laughter :) And it was practically in every line. But rather soon I just gave up, for the first time ever I could…

As an experienced werewolf mercenary you're used to taking on dangerous assignments. Your latest mission is to escort a mysterious man to the capital. Along the way you’ll find danger, adventure and maybe love…with a twist! [h2][u]The Story[/u][/h2] You play as Gwen, a tough and beautiful mercenary. An assignment comes your way from a mysterious customer to escort his friend to the capital of Pentagas, along with three other mercenaries and a squad of soldiers led by Commander Kalim. I am not going to comment too much on the romances in this novel as they have a very interesting twist to them and I am not going to spoil them. However you can have two romance routes with bad, neutral and good endings for each (all accompanied by beautiful cg’s). 🌶️ Spice Level - Medium. Not because any of the images are graphic. There are some nice cg’s of kissing, holding each other and some topless male art but nothing lewd. [h2][u]The Writing & Translation[/u][/h2] The writing or translations for the most part are…really, really rough. There are sentence structure errors, spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. I have no doubt AI was used in the translation. To come across a word suc…

Uh, no. The English version may as well be non-existent - it feels like it has been translated by some generic tools making stupid mistakes and creating a jumbled, hard to understand text. The immersiveness is greatly tampered because of it, so I refunded the game. PS It's hard to click on anything with a mouse-wand.

So far, this gets a positive review from me. Sadly, the English translation is likely a machine translation. It is jumbled and hard to understand. However, the pacing is decent. The art is good. The BGM is also decent. I can see the potential in the writing. Also, minus one point for forcing the MC to drink kvass. Haha jk

While English here sucks so hard that it creates a strange existence of its own... The Russian however? Is superb! I learned of what happened and I do feel bad for the Developer though. D: The story is actually pretty good. I at first didn't like the MC with her "great" personality and sincerely hoped that if she IS the way she is... That there'd be some character growth. It was delivered. She DOES become better, especially after falling for the guys. The guys: There is Mih/Meeh (Is that like a short version of Mihael? Aka Misha? Mayhaps) and "Other". I am unable to say the "Other's" name as it will spoil the twist. I will say that the "Other's" Route is the True Route. He gets an even "further event" and "further story extension"... Unlike Meeh... WAH!!!!!!! I actually liked Mih's personality so much better hahaha. But in the end they were both good for her and they all learned to grow/communicate with one another. That's more than I can ask for from some other novels. The CGs are cute/cool too. Russian style. I even liked the dress switches lol. So overall this was a rather good experience. I may have taken 3 years to read through all this in Russian (*lo…