Dead Detention (Rescribbled)

This is fun, I enjoy this.

I really like the game's main menu. It's so clean, and it doesn't follow the pattern that most games do, which i really like to see. And the sound effect of clicking a button there is so good, dude. And i think that the soundtrack was also quite good. It supported the game's moments and was more to my tastes than most. But maybe some weird or goofy stuff in it would work well with the game. I think that dead detention's biggest problem is just its writing, being a bit amateur. Some of the dialog felt a little forced or didn't really seem believable, like that scene early on when [spoiler]max is like "I just want everything to go back to normal..."[/spoiler] felt a bit abrupt to me 'cause the game had just started. And naomi's reaction, of, like, "We're a team now" also felt a bit too fast, felt like they were too close this early on. I think that naomi is a character who'd become close to someone real fast, but i didn't quite believe it. I think that a few too many scenes end with zombies turning up and max, naomi, and sora then running away or killing them. And i think that max, naomi, and sora kill zombies way too effectively for them to be so terrified whenever zombies turn up…

Peak as ♥♥♥♥!!! I have only gotten one ending and this game is peak. The art style is better then the og, the story is better, hell EVERYTHING IS BETTER! the ONLY flaw is that some of the mini games are a little BS but other then that. 9.5/10, hell maybe even 10/10. worth the $4 :3

10/10 peak remake I proudly requested on newgrounds 🙏🙏🙏

Thanks for remaking this game, it was so much fun to play again after all this time!!

An improved version of a Newgrounds classic