Swimmer Admiration 2

For full disclosure I received a Steam Key due to supporting the Kickstarter for this game. I quite enjoyed the first game, so I was happy to help fund this sequel. However, I think it's important for someone coming into this particular game/series to know that the playable character Aiden is very much not a pleasant fellow. Without too many spoilers for the first game, let's just say there's a reason this game begins with him being released from prison. However, I have to say that I'm a bit surprised at how rough the English is compared to the first game. At first I thought that the way Kaori, the first character we meet, speaks a bit odd was because Aiden is (in-universe) trying to speak in Japanese (or alternatively Kaori is trying to speak in halting English). But even in his personal thoughts, there are spelling mistakes or grammatical errors. For example, Kaori complains about being compared to her accomplished older sister with "It's just the expectation to get to her level can be quite tough and sometimes stress" (instead of "stressful"). Later, she also says "Not when I'm in a family that demands expectation" (instead of "demands excellence" or "expects perfection" or …