Mizuchi 白蛇心傳

i wanted yuri with a monster girl and got that and more, absolute cinema!

We really need more WLW stories with monster ladies in them. Thank you to the developer for letting me romance a snake lady. Loved the setting and general atmosphere. The interactions between the three main characters and their general dynamic were one of the best parts. I wasn't particularly interested in Jinhai as a romance option, though. I'm here for the snake lady, you know? The general pace and mood of the story just made it feel like Ai was the intended romantic partner. I don't think romance VNs always need to have multiple options for romantic partners, but that's my personal preference. My only other really gripe was that the prose and dialogue could do with a little tidying up and general editing. Dialogue can feel pretty wooden and characters sometimes don't sound especially like themselves. In one ending, characters start using terms like "wifey", and it felt a little like I was reading old Twitter threads about "heckin' doggos". Anyway! I enjoyed my time with Mizuchi, even if I don't have any interest in doing Jinhai's route (for now, at least). Linh is an interesting protagonist with a solid story arc; Ai is a cool and aloof snake babe; and I always love to see…

A very pleasant yuri VN that I recommend warmly. Its it good in all its aspects, whichever it is visuals, storytelling, musics, character development. A well rounded and mature piece with some stellar moments. The only bad stuff I can say about is a english localization which has some weird script code in dialogs, a couple of time. But it's not much a problem, most of the piece is fine. If yuri is your thing it's a no brainer to add to your collection.

oh my god this is the tastiest morsel I have had the opportunity to ravish in *months* it's like mochi and green tea for the soul -- sweet, earthy, and soothing

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I think it’s a ok indie visual novel. Dateable characters are fine. Both of them have their own unique and interesting personalities to explore. I also believe there are some moments that can really warm your heart. About the story telling: Beginning of the plot is quite interesting and gives the impression that there will be constant conflicts and action, but after a while things start to slow down. It’s not that I hate slower parts of a story, but there’s definitely a section that feels like it’s just empty(?) Interactions and development between the characters could have been integrated better and pushed beyond simple filler activities so that they actually contributed to the main plot. Most of the major developments in the main story happen during the beginning and last sections, while the middle section itself progresses with a level of monotony that you wouldn’t even expect from a slice of life anime. As for the visuals, if I try to be objective about it: character art and backgrounds used throughout the script are pretty ok. However some of the cutscenes have noticeably different art styles that can feel a little bit strange at times. Some of the pngs also feel like they …