Quinn & Flynn

I was expecting just a romance-focused visual novel, but I was positively surprised by a captivating story with great displays of real world problems and well-written characters. That being said, A.C.A.B.

Rather excellent. Very focused writing, and all chapters have a gripping drama to them. Scenes have that lovely elastic snap to them that comes from a writer who understands the importance of pacing. Couldn't put it down!

What a delight to encounter VN full of the deft touches and craft of a writer who is not only skilled, but specifically experienced in creating interactive fiction. The opportunity to consider the timing of responses in conversation or refrain from responding entirely add an engaging and naturalistic twist -- as well as a surprising angle for characterization.

The pacing of this game is fantastic! The writing and the way each sentence continues upwards in typewriter format made me glued to the screen the whole time! A very well written noir BL narrative! I deeply enjoyed it. I will say while i admire and appreciate the themes of shifting ones views on the world and fighting systemic injustice, I can't help but find it very unbelievable how quickly the two police characters changed their beliefs. I understand this is a short narrative so I won't fault the writer, but in terms of my preference for stories of growth and learning it felt very sudden and unrealistic to see how the characters perspectives were so easily changed. I also am not a fan of how murky and unclear all 3 characters consequences were for how they've harmed each other and how they potentially 'forgave' one another or not. Just felt like the weight of some of these actions was very easily brushed off. These personal narrative qualms aside this is definitely worth the price and I still thoroughly enjoyed the experience!

Very good

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