Dawn of Griseo

I committed to finishing it after liking the first two hours or so, but it just goes downhill and offers nothing by the end. A fairly stiff atmosphere throughout the entire read. So much repetition like hearing over and over how certain parts of the world work. Which the reader can already understand the first time much less the fifteenth. It makes up a lot of mysteries but then answers them by giving out long spiels killing any of the interest or emotion behind them. It just becomes so bad reading the same plot points over and over from different perspectives in up to hour-long sections. Much of which is information the reader already knows about. The differences of which could be summarized in a short paragraph. There's something in here that could be good, just needs to cut out the repetitiveness and add more meaningfulness.

Appealing art style and semi-generic setting. The translation seems well done, although I wonder if "dark wizard" was meant to be "black wizard" instead...

For God so loved the world that he gave his only begotten Son, so that everyone who believes in him should not perish but have eternal life. For God did not send his Son into the world to condemn the world, but that the world might be saved through him. (John 3:16-17) [h1] THERE IS ONLY SALVATION IN CHRIST JESUS[/h1] [h1] WE ARE ALL SINNERS AND SIN SEPARATES US FROM GOD[/h1] For “ALL” have sinned, and fall short of the glory of God” (Romans 3:23). [h1] WE NEED TO REPENT FROM OUR SINS[/h1] He who covers up his sins will not prosper; but he who confesses them and turns away will obtain mercy (Proverbs 28:13). [h1]JESUS CHRIST IS THE "ONLY MEDIATOR"[/h1] Because there is only one God, and only one mediator between God and men, the man Christ Jesus (1 Timothy 2:5). In the beginning he was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God (John 1.1). And that Word was made flesh, and dwelt among us, (John 1.14). The next day John saw Jesus coming to him, and said, "Behold the Lamb of God, who takes away the sin of the world" (John 1:29). Jesus Christ, the Son of God, is the only one who can give us eternal life and save us from the wrath to come. Salvation is not throu…

[h1]Before I played Dawn of Griseo, I had a small pp, no friends, no gf, depression, and no life. These things havent changed, but the game is pretty good[/h1]