Unsupervised

Had fun with it but it's ending made the entire game feel like a Chapter One/Prologue and it's end there

This is honestly a good read, and I can't wait to read a sequel.

Great game!

I have a few problems with Unsupervised. Don't really feel like meandering around, so here they are: 1. Stat checks don't apply in situations where they should matter most. Building a character up to fight supervillains and not allowing any stat-checks in combat with these people sucks big time. The game doesn't have smart enough writing to negate the need for this like Fallen Hero's more limited usage of checks. 2. The game has too many endings with too much variation. When creating an IF with a clear sequel in mind like Unsupervised, you gotta limit your scope in what you allow the player to do, so that the sequel doesn't necessitate double the wordcount whilst giving the player roughly the same amount of time in-game as the original. IF authors already have to write at much higher word counts, spare your players the need to wait an extra three years on the sequel and just remove some branching in favor of more covert factions and storytelling. 3. This game absolutely NEEDS a sequel, not in that I loved this one or found it unique, but to give us the rest of the story. So many things are built up to in this game without satisfying payoff. The villains just attack, there'…

i have played unsupervised plenty of times during the first version. despite the cliffhanger ending, i really enjoyed everything. now that i just found out that the ending got expanded, i am excited to replay again. literal fire, can't wait to replay the new version, and i CANNOT wait for the sequel if there will be one

I liked it.