Magic Exposure – Yuri Visual Novel

[h2] Story/Concept [/h2] Rather simple, the main character encounters a demon attending their school and the two get closer as time goes on thanks to a magic camera. However, despite the name and logo focusing on the camera, it feels neglected throughout the story. [h2] Characters [/h2] There are two main girls, Bianca, a rabbit girl, and Erika, a demon wolf girl. I like their designs but none of the various descriptions ever match the sprite art that's shown. There are some minor characters that appear but they do not have sprite art. While we do learn traits about Bianca, we don't really learn much about Erika. [h2] Pacing [/h2] The pacing for both the characters and story is poor. The story moves incredibly fast and this harms the writing as we don't get proper down-time for most of the events that follow. Character growth is rarely shown shown and is instead often done off screen with brief summaries after the fact. There's a good moment of conflict later in but it's resolved too quickly to feel impactful and instead falls flat. I finished the story in just over an hour, but I try to read slow to absorb stories more, so the average reader will likely finish well before an …

furry lesbians but one of them is goth

Short, sweet, and indulgent. It's ironically kinda rare to see indulgence like this in yuri VNs, and it's what I always hope to see in all of them. There were several times I anticipated a trope derailing or postponing the relationship, as is VERY common in the scene for some reason, only to be pleasantly surprised when my worries for it were shot down by a character making reasonable choices. There is more yuri here in this concise story than I've gotten from most higher priced alternatives that boast much longer playtimes. My girlfriend, who I play every yuri vn with, agrees. I'm looking forward to any of your future wlw stories.

Short but really cute Yuri

Overall i think the game was good a few parts i didn't like was there was no ending drawings and other scenes had no unique drawing the story was quick but again i liked it, definitely not for everyone but if you like furries and cute Yuri story's this one is good

[b]short review:[/h1][/b] 5.5/10. feels very rushed but has cute story, writer brain sad :( [b]long in-depth review:[/h1][/b] 5.5/10. i got gifted this game for my birthday since i had it on my wishlist for a while. this game is very cute, it has a pretty interesting premise and i liked the beginning parts. however, as i got more and more into it, i slowly started to get more frustrated at how the writers speeded through the story, like they needed to catch a train within the game's runtime. im a writer myself, and i think they could've done a bit of a better job highlighting some scenes. i get that it's sold as a "short game", but personally i wouldn't have minded if some moments were fleshed out more. as another review has pointed out, it feels like English isn't the writer's first language, but you could've at least hired someone who does know how to write out a fully-fledged story. because i don't like to give out bold, baseless claims and since i don't like belittling other people's work of art without constructive criticism, i am going to share some of the specific moments that i shared with some of my friends i discussed this game with: [list] [*]right so im playing…